Having your script critiqued by a professional Hollywood reader is
a structured, non threatening way to get inexpensive and constructive
feedback on your script and writing skills. You want to be sure that
you make the most of the ONE chance your script has to make a good first
impression.
Dr. Melody Jackson, who does all of Smart Girls critiques, is "Highly
Recommended" and rated one of the "Top 5" script analysts
in the country by Creative Screenwriting magazine.
Call Smart Girls for valuable, honest,
and useful feedback on your screenplay. Melody Jackson will assess
your script's strengths and weaknesses and then present you with ideas
on how to more powerfully tell YOUR story. Areas covered include:
- The Three Fundamental Cornerstones of a sound script
- Character development and meaningful arcs
- Cut out excess story fat
- Create swift-moving, interesting "real" dialogue
- Make your script more commercially viable!
| Basic Oral Script Critique (60-min
Consultation) |
$325 |
| Advanced Oral Script Critique (1-2
pages of Bullet Points with 2-Hour Consult) |
$495 |
| Development Critique (6-7 pages of
Analysis with 30-Min Consult) |
$495 |
| Summary Script Critique (6-7 pages of Analysis) |
$450 |
| Master Script Breakdown (20 page, Charts, Editing
Read, 2-Hour Consult) |
$1495 |
Add-on Script Editing Read (for marking up script
pages)
|
$195 |
| The Script Editing Read is to be
used in conjunction with one of the critiques listed above and provides
for reading the script a second time through to mark notes on the
pages; included in Master Script Breakdown |
| Oral Market Ready Sign-Off Review (15-min final
review evaluation) |
$200 |
| Written Market Ready Sign-Off Review |
$250 |
| 2 to 3 pages of written bulleted
notes addressing up to ten marketing concerns |
| 1-Hour Consult on Treatment or Outline of 1-10
pages |
$150 |
| Your oral critique can be done
in person or by phone! |
| Script Consultation Additional Hours |
$125 per hour |
| A follow-up critique of the same script
within 60 days receives a $25 discount. |
