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SCRIPT ANALYSES &
CRITIQUES
Melody
Jackson, who does all critiques for Smart Girls, is currently in her third year toward
earning her Ph.D. in Mythological Studies and was recently named one of the Top 5 Script
Analysts in the country by Creative Screenwriting magazine. She has
produced one 45-minute movie titled "High Hopes" and a documentary and has been
hired to write two feature-length scripts.
For valuable, inspirational,
and useful feedback on your script, call on Smart Girls. Offering both oral and written
critiques, Melody Jackson will assess your script's strengths and weaknesses and provide
suggestions for improving it. Areas in which you may receive advice include:
n Creating believable, interesting characters & developing their arcs.
n Maximizing the stakes for a highly-charged climax.
n Interweaving theme, plot, dialogue, and characters.
n Strengthening dialogue and use of visuals.
n Making your script most marketable.
. . . and much, much more!
OUR MOST POPULAR CRITIQUES
Development Critique |
$495 |
6-7 pages of notes,
30-minute consultation, basic notes on script pages |
Basic Oral Script Critique |
$325 |
60-minute critique with
basic notes on script pages. |
Summary Script Critique (6-7 pages & notes on script pages) |
$450 |
Standard Script Analysis (15-16 page review & notes on script pages)
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$795 |
| Comprehensive Script Analysis (25-30 page review, notes on script pages, 60-minute consulation, graphs &
charts) |
$1295 |
ADVANCED CRITIQUES
& SPECIALTY SERVICES
Advanced Oral Script Critique |
$450 |
| Includes 2
hours of consultation & 1-2 pages of bullet points covered. |
1-Hour Oral Critique of Treatment/Outline of 1-10
pages |
$150 |
Oral Market Ready Review (Read
script & give 15-min of feedback on 10 marketing questions) |
$195 |
Written Market Ready Review (Read
script & write 2-3 pages of answers to 10 marketing questions) |
$250 |
| Written Market Ready Review (Read script &
give 15-min marketing feedback) |
$200 |
Script Consultation Additional Hours |
$125/hr. |
Your oral critique can
be done in person or by phone.
Follow-up critique of same script within 60 Days receives $25 Credit
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